SYLLABUS FOR W131
Hannah-Hansen – Section 16409
Prince/Shoup – Section 16424
"To feel most beautifully alive means to be reading something beautiful, ready always to apprehend in
flow of the language the sudden flash of poetry."
Gaston Bachelard
Course description: This is a college writing course, and you are expected to be enrolled for college credit unless your intended college does not transfer the credit or unless you have over a 670 on the verbal SAT (in which case IU exempts you from W 131). You should check these criteria with your instructor. This course is designed to help you develop critical reading, writing, and thinking skills and to experience the varied range of academic writing. It will stress the writing process, various organizational and developmental patterns, and fluency to match the purpose of the individual assignment. The course will prepare you for the demands of academic college writing, including analyzing, summarizing, synthesizing, evaluating, researching, and documenting. It is also designed to prepare you with skills useful in the world beyond your academic pursuits. Upon application and acceptance by Indiana University through the Advance College Project Office and the payment of appropriate fees, you will receive three hours of college credit through Indiana University and fulfill the general writing requirement at that institution. The IU fee is $113.30 a credit hour; this course is a three-credit course. This cost is less than half of the cost of taking an IU course on campus. If you enroll for credit, you will receive a bill from the bursar’s office. Once the ACP office accepts your application, withdrawal is not an option. Credit can be transferred to most institutions, but you need to take the responsibility of contacting the admissions office and/or the English department of the schools where you apply to determine transferability.
Required texts: Writing and Reading Across the Curriculum: Brief Edition (2nd edition), Behrens and Rosen; also Writing Analytically, Stephens and Wasserman (4th edition). Other material will be provided in handouts or as classroom references.
Required materials: You must have a loose leaf notebook in which all course materials are kept including reading notes, handouts, class discussion notes, and drafts.
Webpages:
http://www.south.mccsc.edu/~mhansen/W131.htm
This site contains the syllabus, assignment sheets, and links to some out-of-class readings.
http://www.south.mccsc.edu/~sou_lad/Tools.htm
The Language Arts website contains a page of helpful tools for writers ranging from sample MLA to MLA "format mills." A helpful guide to the Cornell system – as well as other systems of note-taking – can be found on the site as well.Participation expectations: You will need to have your text and notebook each day. Your notebook is an important tool for you to use in responding to your reading. It will also be worth a significant percent of the class grade. You will hand in the annotated articles and notes at the same time you hand in the paper for the unit. The annotations/notes are due, though, as soon as the article/chapter is assigned and will be checked throughout the semester. When you take notes from the articles in WRAC, please use the following format (sometimes referred to as the Cornell method)
At the top of the page write the author and title of the assigned article. Divide the page into two vertical sections. On the right hand side take notes from the reading and document the page numbers. On the left side note your responses to the reading. You may not have a reaction to every note, but you can also use this space to enter questions and ideas from class discussion. This page should be completed every time a reading is due. You should be prepared to share your comments with the class. The purpose of the notebook is to provide an avenue in which you may react to the particular piece of writing we are studying as well as to insure a careful reading of the article.
When you are reading instructional material, you do not use a double-sided entry. Instructional material would include any "how-to-do-it" material found in WRAC or WA. You will never be using a double-sided entry from WA. I will put an asterisk by any article that I require to be double-sided. You are always welcome to do more than what I require.
You should expect a few reading quizzes. We will have some regularly scheduled conferences for certain papers, but you are always encouraged to visit with your instructor. It is your responsibility to contact us if you are confused about any aspect of the course or the assignment, and it is our responsibility to try to help you become a stronger, more confident student. We are available most days after school except for Tuesdays, or we can meet before school if you let us know in advance. Our prep periods are 4th period, and Mrs. Hansen is also available (sometimes) 5th period during her department chair period. This 5th period slot particularly pertains to Mrs. Prince’s class from the beginning of the trimester until she returns in January. Her students will have open access to Mrs. Hansen during 5th period during her absence. Mr. Shoup is, of course, available during the class for questions of any sort. In any case, please make an appointment to see us so that we can be in our room – even if it is our prep.
Emails and voice mail:
Hannah – Hansen
mhansen@mccsc.edu 330-7714 x1069Shoup (substitute for Prince)
dshoup@mccsc.edu (November – December) 330-7714 x 51071Prince
raziz@mccsc.edu (January – March) 330-7714 x 51071We can be best reached by email.
Read all assignments carefully before class and have completed the note-taking process outlined above when you come to class. Again, this is a rigorous course and should receive its due focus and allotted time from you. Work and extra-curricular activities do not excuse your lack of preparation.
Grading: Students will be graded on the process as well as the final product. Grading is sequential and continuous throughout the semester. The early assignments will be worth low point totals (10, 20, 50), and these values will increase with the increasing difficulty of the assignments. The notebooks will count between 10% and 20% of your grade. You will be graded on the process as well as the final product. Rough drafts will be graded on their due dates; no credit will be awarded for late rough drafts, as they will be a necessary component of the lesson on the due date. Your notes will accompany your final paper, peer editing comments, and rough draft(s). A paper must have all rough drafts attached in order to be accepted. No paper will be accepted without a rough draft. No points will be awarded for a late rough draft. All your work will be kept in a classroom portfolio. To receive full credit, your paper must be submitted during the class in which it is due. If you come to school during any part of the day, your work is still due; if you turn it in the next day, it will not count. I am accepting no late work for credit. You will not be able to make up missed daily work so regular attendance is important. Contact your instructor if you will be absent for a prolonged period of time. Omitting a paper will cause you to fail the course.
Students must submit two rough drafts when drafts are due; this is a requirement. These drafts are due at the beginning of the class. Do not ask to go to the library to print them. I will not edit the paper of anyone who does not give me the second draft.
Final papers must include three drafts: the peer edited draft, the teacher edited draft, and your revised draft. The peer-edited and teacher-edited drafts are copies of the same draft. If I have required more drafts, you must also include those drafts as well. Technology is never an acceptable excuse for failure to turn in an assignment. If your printer fails, hand write the assignment in ink – every other line – one side only.
As you know, plusses and minuses DO count into your GPA. Further, the grade you earn in this course will be the starting grade for your college academic career. Thus, if you do not earn higher than a C, you will not receive credit and may likely enter college on academic probation! Hence, you should be ready to work in this class!
As BHSS is now weighing HD and AP/ACP classes, you will receive an extra GPA point for your work in this class. Thus, if you earn a 2.11, this will really be a 3.11 when figured into your cumulative GPA
.TurnItIn.Com: Part of the work in this class will involve this website. I will sometimes ask you to submit papers to the site; the final paper must be submitted there. We will also use this site as a place for discussion. You must also "join the class." Go to the website and join the following class:
(for Hannah-Hansen) T2 W131 Comp H
The class ID is 2062121. The enrollment password is "critique."
(for Prince/Shoup) T3 W131 College Comp P
The class ID is 2062123.
The enrollment password is "critique."You will need an email address in order to access
www.turnitin.com. Enrollment begins 11/12Absences: Because you have all due dates in front of you on this syllabus, all large papers are due on the due date, regardless of absences accrued prior to the due date. If you are not at school, you must email me your paper by the start of the period in which it is due – even if the absence is excused. I will not grade the paper, though, until I have a hard copy from you along with your rough drafts. If you are absent when a rough draft or some other assignment from the writing process is due, I will not be able to look at that work unless you email it to me by the end of the school day.
Work for unexcused absences will not be considered and will receive a zero. Parents have 24 hours to excuse your absence; I will not accept work for an unexcused absence after 24 hours, even if the absence is changed from unexcused to excused at a later date. Students cannot receive credit for assignments if they have unexcused absences
. This includes work that was assigned and due the day of the absence. No late work will be accepted.If you do not miss my class during the first 6 weeks, you may have one late pass for a major paper during the second 6 weeks.
Tardies: Tardies will be addressed using the school policy—on your 4th, a Saturday School Detention will be assigned. Please sign clipboard in back of room if you are tardy.
Format: All out-of class writing must be typed, and all in-class writing must be done in pen (blue or black ink only.
Plagiarism: Any paper with your name on it claims you are the author—the wording and ideas are yours, with exceptions indicated by quotation marks and citations.
Plagiarism is presenting someone else's work as your own. It is dishonest and must be avoided. Borrowing, buying, or stealing someone else's work obviously constitutes plagiarism. You are also guilty of plagiarism when you use either an author's ideas or his/her exact words without enclosing them in quotation marks and giving credit to the author (done through citation). Evidence of plagiarism will result in an F for the assignment and/or an F in the course. In either case, a report will be filed with the Dean of Students at Indiana University. You may want to look at the Indiana University Code of Student Rights, Responsibilities, and Conduct at http://www.dsa.indiana.edu/Code/. Having another person edit your paper – even an parent – and rewriting sections of it is another form of plagiarism. In addition, please review the Bloomington South Language Art’s plagiarism policy at http://www.south.mccsc.edu/~sou_lad/
Existing: Basic decency and respect will be modeled by everyone in every case. This course is very much centered on discussion, as well as open consideration of various interpretations of works. Thus, you must respect the contributions of your classmates or you will be removed from the classroom. Self-control should not be an issue by your senior year, but if there are behavioral issues, I will speak to you on an individual basis so as to correct the problem.
Fire Drills: This class meets by the flagpole in the event of a fire drill or actual fire. Exit the room and turn right. Continue until you come to the staircase across from the library and descend there. Our place is a few places to the left of the flagpole; you must meet me there. If our exit is blocked by a fire, we will either backtrack or continue down the counseling hallway to exit at the doors at the bottom of the ramp.
You must submit all assigned work. An estimated general breakdown of the grading is as follows:
Draft points Final Points
#1 Summary 5 50 points
#2 Critique 11 75 points
#3 Comparative Critique 10 100 points
#4 Comparative Analysis 15 150 points
#5 Review of Sources/Writing Plan 50
#6 Researched Trend Paper 20 200 points
Reading and Writing Notebook 100 points
Quizzes and other in-class activities 125 points
9011 Points (points for quizzes and other activities may alter total.
Assignments: You will receive a separate assignment sheet for each major writing assignment. This guide will provide objectives, grading criteria, length of assignment and due date as well as your instructor's suggestions.
Unit One: Intro to Analytical Writing/Summary – November 12-November 28
Students will:
understand the guidelines and requirements of the course
practice and develop skills of "athletic" reading including annotating and note taking
understand what goes into the process of critical and analytical reading
be able to summarize accurately, concisely, and objectively
distinguish between paraphrase and summary
begin to read critically and interpretively
practice effective writing practices and make moves towards analysis
credit and document sources
Readings: "The Difference Between High School and College"
http://lilt.ilstu.edu/gmklass/foi/readings/high_school_and_college.htmlSelected Readings from Writing Analytically (WA) and WRAC
Selected Readings from WRAC; focus on Chapter 1 & Chapter 7
Writings: Practice summary of selected article
Draft and final summary of another selected article
Due dates: (Work should be completed by date listed)
11/12 Intro to course; "The Difference between High School and College." Prepare a one page response to the article. You may use "I." This paper is NOT a summary, but a response to what the author says.
11/13 Response to "The Difference between High School and College" due. Discussion.
Generate charts.
11/14 Ch 1 WRAC, pp. 3-23. In-class reading day. Assign summary of charts.
11/15 In-class reading day. WA, Chapter 5, pp. 144-148, "What’s Wrong with the Five Paragraph Form:" WRAC "What’s Happening at the Mall" (no double-siding) (WRAC pp. 245-248) and William Kowinski’s "Mallaise: How to Know if You Have it" * (WRAC pp. 23-326 )
11/16 (Notes from WA and double-sided from Kowinski due) WA Chapter 10, pp. 258-
269, "Style: Choosing Words," WA section on paraphrasing pp. 13-14, 116-117;
plagiarism, pp.335-338; in-text and end of text citations pp. 338-340. Discussion of
Kowinski.
11/19 Test over summer reading; bring summer reading book. Summary of charts due.
11/20 Practice summary of Kowinski’s essay; WA, editing, pp. 258-260
11/21 Read George Lewis’s "Community through Exclusion and Illusion" * (WRAC pp. 311-321) Class discussion. Double-sided notes due.
11/26 Summary Draft of Lewis’s essay (Bring two copies)
11/27 Discuss summary; begin Unit Two over Critique
11/28 Final Draft Summary Lewis essay (Begin Unit Two over Critique)
Unit Two: Critique November 27-December 17
Work is due on the date listed, unless otherwise indicated. The previous unit indicated when notes were due to help you get started. Now you must remember that they are due on the date listed.
Objective: The purpose of the critique is not to persuade the reader to any particular belief or action, nor is it a forum for the writer to merely express agreement and/or disagreement with the author of the essay. Instead, in order to increase the reader’s understanding of an article, a critique simultaneously summarizes as well as analyzes one article by focusing on and evaluating the rhetorical strategies, logic, evidence, underlying assumptions, biases, and reasons that the author explicitly or implicitly conveys in forwarding his or her perspective/interpretation.
Students will:
begin to observe and interpret details to a greater extent than before
learn strategies for linking evidence to claims
practice 10-on-1 exercises
understand the importance of an evolving thesis
demonstrate ability to critique objectively, building upon the summary
be able to analyze an author’s assumptions, values, and rhetorical style
review and apply MLA format for citation
11/27 In-class reading day: WA Chapter 1, pp. 24-34, "The Basic Analytical Strategies."
Read Chapter 2, pp. 42-66, "Five Analytical Moves."
11/28 WRAC, Chapter 2 pp. 22-44, "Critical Reading and Critique" (Notes due 8/30) Summary
due.
11/29 In-class reading: WA Chapter 4, pp. 110-120, "How to Read: Words Matter," Victor Gruen and Larry Smith, "Shopping Towns USA," WRAC 273-278 and Ira Zepp, "The Shopping Mall as Sacred Space," WRAC 286-295
11/30 Discussion of Gruen and Smith; Zepp (double-sided for Gruen/Smith and Zepp due)
12/3 In-class reading: Annotations are due on the day of discussion
Laura Paquet "A Social History of Shopping" WRAC 255-265
Lizabeth Cohn "From Town Center to Shopping Center" WRAC 295-305
David Guterson "Enlcosed. Encyclopedic. Endured: One Week at the Mall of America." WRAC 279-286
12/4 Discussion of Paquet and Cohn (Double-sided due)
12/5 Discussion of Guterson and Francaviglia (Double-sided due)
12/6 Quiz on the tools of critique. WA, Chapter 4, "What to Do with the Reading," pp. 120-136; WA, Chapter 5, pp. 137-141, "Linking Evidence and Claims", pp. 148-160, "Building a Paper by Analyzing Evidence in Depth: 10 on 1"
12/7 Work on the Critique Draft from one of the authors from above. (lab time – we hope)
12/10 Critique Rough Draft due (Bring Two Copies) Conferences
12/11 Reading Day, WA Ch 6 pp. 164-178, "Making a Thesis Evolve"
WA, Chapter 7; Conferences
12/12 In-Class Reading Day WA Chapter 8, "Introductions," pp. 219-229, WA Chapter 8 Conclusions pp. 229-239; Conferences
12/13 Work Day; Conferences
12/14 Final Critique due. In-class reading day.
Unit Three: Comparative Critique (2 weeks) December 17—January 16
Objective: In this unit you will build on summary as well as critique skills in order to comparatively analyze two source articles. The goal of a comparative critique is to analyze two sources that perceivably address the same issue and to evaluate and compare how each author establishes a position by focusing on their arguments, evidence and underlying assumptions.
Students will:
learn how to interweave a source throughout the text—make the source speak
build upon critique skills to use multiple sources in an essay
hone interpretive reading skills, summary skills, and critique skills
evaluate sources for reliability and workability
remedy problems with weak theses
review and apply MLA format for citation
Due dates: (Work should be completed by date listed)
12/17 In-class reading day. WRAC Chapter 3, pp. 45-84
12/18 In-class activity – Chart the major ideas of each author – pt. by pt.
12/19 Workday – draft of a comparative synthesis – lab time
12/20 Draft of Comparative Synthesis due (two copies)
12/21 Making the leap from comparison to critique. Ideas and argument – ideas and support? Who argues what and how? How do you respond to the authors and why?
(turnitin discussion thread – required)
1/7 Work day. Review WA about x and y.
1/8 Comparative Critique Outline due with working thesis statement
1/9 Work on Comparative Critique papers; WA "What to Do with Secondary Sources," pp. 296-302
1/10 Comparative Critique Rough Draft due Work on revising/editing comparative critique papers
1/11 Work Day; Reading Day; Conferences
1/14 Work Day; Conferences
1/15 (See below); Conferences
1/16 Final Comparative Critique Due (100 pts.)
Unit Four: Comparative Analysis (3 weeks) January 15 – February 1
Objective: The goal of a comparative analysis is to perform an analysis of "something out there" through the theoretical lens provided by 2-3 source texts that analyze similar objects. Thus, a comparative analysis applies viewpoints expressed in various texts to analyze a third text or what might be called a test object. In other words, what happens when the view of one author is used as a lens with which to interpret/view another text? Ultimately, a comparative analysis focuses on the object of analysis, not on the sources; and it engages the reader in a deeper sense of discovery about the object of analysis.
Students will:
apply analysis skills to a test object using two articles as a "lens" for analysis
learn how to interweave sources throughout the text—make the source speak
build upon critique skills to use multiple sources in an essay
hone interpretive reading skills, summary skills, and critique skills
review and apply MLA format for citation
remedy problems with weak theses
1/15 WRAC, Chapter 4, 85-104
1/16 (CC Due) Begin formulating the basic ideas you have formed from your readings. Use your double-sided notes to see what stands out. Lenses
1/17 In-class activity. Discussion
1/18 Discussion
1/21 Martin Luther King Day – "A day on, not a day off."
1/22 Writing Plan due for Comparative Analysis
1/23 Work Day
1/24 Work Day
1/25 Rough Draft Due Comparative Analysis (Two copies)
1/28 Work on revision; conferences
1/29Work on revision; conferences
1/30 Work on revisions; conferences
1/31 Final Draft of Comparative Analysis Due (150 pts.)
Review Ch 8-10, 14 WA; Begin work on trend analysis paper (Reading day and library day)
Unit Five: Trend Analysis February 1—22
Objective: This unit incorporates all the skills of the previous units. Yet, unlike the previous units, this is an open source paper. Students will be required to critically analyze a trend in contemporary American culture in order to come to a greater understanding of the meaning of the trend, what statement(s) this trend might be making about modern American culture and how this trend reflects and/or refutes and/or creates myths, values, ideologies, etc. in modern American society. Students should be able to find visible manifestations (if possible) of the trend to share with class to verify its existence in modern culture. In addition, I will ask that students present their findings to the class in a 3-5 minute in-class presentation. (These presentations will take place during our final exam period – more information will be given in class about presentation requirements as the time draws closer)
Students will:
identify a plausible trend in our society, identify what conditions are necessary for the trend to flourish, and speculate on meaning and societal ramifications
learn how to interweave sources throughout the text—make the source speak
build upon critique skills to use multiple sources in an essay
hone interpretive reading skills, summary skills, and critique skills
review and apply MLA format for citation
remedy problems with weak theses
Writings: Choice of Topic Explanation and Speculation (handout)
Writing plan for trend analysis assignment (handout)
Draft and final trend analysis essay (handout)
Due dates: (Work should be completed by date listed):
2/1Final Draft of Comparative Analysis Due (150 pts.)
Begin work on trend analysis paper. (Reading day and library day)
2/4 Work on Trend Analysis WA 323-343
2/5 Choice of Topic for Trend Analysis and Speculation due (10 points). Share topics and ideas in class (discussion thread due)
2/6 Work on Writing Plan
2/7 Work on Writing Plan
2/8 Writing Plan Due - Trend Analysis (25 points); Work on Trend Analysis
2/11 Work on Trend Analysis and Outline
2/12 Outline Due (15 points)
2/13 Work on Trend Analysis
2/14 Work on Trend Analysis
2/15 Rough Draft of Trend Due (25 copies) (two copies)
Rest of time in conferences
2/20Trend Paper Due